WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
At the Beach
On Monday we were at the Paihia beach and I went with my Mum, my brother and my sister.
First me and my sister went to have a swim and I drank some of the seawater. It was gross and I felt heaps of seaweed. I ran out of the water because I got afraid and my sister ran out too because I ran out. She thought there was a shark. Then she didn't go back in the water. After that we went to play in the sand. Next we went to play on the park. I met this girl and her name was Charlie. She was a very nice girl. Then we went to play on the monkey bars. Me and Charlie had a challenge to see who can stay on the monkey bars the longest. Charlie won and I lost but it was okay I did not get upset.
Finally my sister wanted to play tag with us and so I let her play. Then it was time to leave and I had to say goodbye.
I had a great time and it was a fun day and I felt happy.
