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Friday, October 1, 2021

NARRTIVE WRITING-Max´s new flamming shorts

 

Max´s new flaming Shorts Max woke up with a wonderful smile on his face. He walked out to the kitchen and he put his flaming red, yellow, orange and white hot shorts in his school bag. He could not wait to show his friends. Suddenly he was so excited he ran out the door as fast as a racecar. On his way out Mum said, “Don't lose your shorts like you lost your T-Shirt last year.” Max said, “Don`t worry.” Then it was swimming time he rushed to the pool. His togs dropped out of his bag because he ran so fast that he bumped into Elli. “OUCH!?” said Elli. “Watch where you're going.” Max said, “Sorry.” When it was time to get changed he opened his bag with a smile on his face but then he suddenly realised his new flaming hot shorts weren't in his bag. His smile went upside down to a worried frown He walked outside the boys changing room and told the teacher that he lost his new flaming hot shorts.¨I can't find them anywhere,¨ he cried. His shoulders dropped. Tears were coming out of his eyes. He was just looking at the ground.